Lovely. Not everyone can capture the way Illya sounds as someone who learned English, and that often ruins the story for me. But you did an excellent job, I could visualize this so easily.
From: Ursula Date: 02/19/2005
"My love can be constant; it just isn't very often."
You caught an essence of Napoleon that he does not allow to be seen very often. There are a few episodes that show how devoted he is to his friends and to the few women he loved seriously. He keeps his emotions at bay as much as Illya although unlike Illya he covers his barriers with charm and an outgoing nature. When love and passion unite, there's danger for Napoleon. Yet he could not choose a better love than Illya.