I love how Napoleon slowly realizes how seriously Illya is taking the tickling incident and begins to worry he's gone too far. Wonderful storytelling, thanks for sharing!
From: Shayheyred Date: 12/28/2004
Just in case I didn't mention it before, not only do I find this story delightful, but the first-person pov is really well done. You don't see much Napoleon POV around, and you've done it beautifully, with the right combination of appreciation and apprehension. Thank you again!