I thought this story was well done. The idea of Illya being a sexual innocent because of a physical problem was written believably as was an understanding Napoleon.
Thanks for sharing.
From: nataliya Date: 09/07/2009
How has this Jane Terry piece escaped my attention until now? You always put lovely feelings into your stories. I think this needs a sequel. And what about putting your other zine stories here?
From: Cynara Date: 12/13/2008
This was very intriguing and wonderfully executed.
Lovely. I'll try to be more coherent at a later time.
From: Ghostie Date: 02/05/2005
Wow! What a neat story. I really enjoyed reading this; Illya's slow discovery and Napoleon's attentiveness...a delicious combination! Thank you for sharing. :)
From: DiT Date: 02/02/2005
I'm not usually a fan of sexually dysfunctional Illya, but this story was written so sweetly, amusingly and convincingly that I just couldn't stop reading until the delightful final sentence! It goes to show that in the right hands, anything is possible (isn't that right, Illya ;-) )
From: Shayheyred Date: 02/01/2005
Congratulations! You've written the only "sexually damaged Illya" story I've ever really, truly enjoyed. Very clever, very fun, and very sweet, in its own way.