I would be amiss if I didn't comment on this story, as I've read it several times over the past year.
A nice little story, paints a moving picture in my head. Hot, of course.
From: ChannelD Date: 02/19/2008
I just found and absolutely love your stories. You are the only author I have read who manages to pull off the disparate images of them 'getting the girl' in every episode and yet being committed lovers. I love it. I read this one at work on my break and now I am all breathless and it is like falling from an airplane myself (tho alone, alas) to return to real life. Thank you so much. I have only read 3 so far (thanks to Irene, who recced your whole collection in luminous beings) but am going through them all and will no doubt be in touch with you again.
Thank you once more for sharing
From: Viviana Date: 05/16/2006
Wow! That was so hot! I liked the metaphor too. Great visual.