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Comments on Standard Procedure

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From:
loosha
Date:
07/26/2011
Wow! I'm breathless! Hitting this one into the favourites folder. Thank you!

From:
alynwa
Date:
03/19/2011
This is a fantastic twist on the "first time" spin! Thanks for sharing.

From:
Jan
Date:
12/10/2004
"Well, why don't we just enjoy ourselves until you leave for Survival School, and then when you get back we'll see what happens. You never know --after nine months of that hell you might be so glad to see me you'll never want to be out of my sight again."

Oh how I loved those lines and that "leave 'em wanting more" ending; it definitely makes me want to know what happens after Survival School! This was such a joy to read, and I'm so glad you shared it online. Now I'm hoping that there was a sequel which might make its glorious way into Chrome & Gunmetal as well.

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