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From:
Cary
Date:
01/27/2016
A very emotional story. One I enjoyed very much but I can't help feeling it should be longer. Have you thought of continuing it?

From:
alynwa
Date:
03/17/2011
This was just lovely. Napoleon slowly realizing that even his relationship with Illya has changed. I like that it is Illya who provides the solution, that Mark realizes April is more than his "sister" and that hopefully, everyone will have a happy ending.

Thanks so much for writing this!

From:
c
Date:
04/08/2009
with this nap/illya and mark/april pairings, i begin to wonder if uncle alex's partner pairing was more of a couple pairing...

anyway, cute story. so sad that it took some persuasion to get me to read it. much much better than i thought ^-^

From:
Katya B
Date:
02/16/2005
As always, Nat, that was just gorgeous. I love the emotion seething away below the surface here. Beautifully written, very subtle, and absolutely in character. Thank you!

From:
Ghostie
Date:
02/05/2005
This was *very* interesting -- the awkward tension in the air (when Nap was still trying to mix with Illya and other Section Two agents) was heartbreaking, yet so believable. I was quite sad most of the way through this...until the end! Yay for all the possibilities. :) I hope Illya does become his assistant...among other things. *g* Thank you for sharing this story!

From:
DiT
Date:
02/02/2005
Howcome I've not read this one before, Nat? What a lovely peek into the future. It's so believable, and even makes me sympathetic towards Mark and April. Very, very nice.

From:
shayheyred
Date:
02/01/2005
What an interesting look at the changes that come to Our Heroes. And I love the wistful musings of Mark about April. I hope he gets his transfer, too.

From:
Sue
Date:
02/01/2005
What a great story. I wrote a lot about this on another form but it wouldn't have it when I submitted it. Tried three different browsers too. If this goes I'll try again to tell you how much I enjoyed your story. :o) Sue

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