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Comments on Shore to Ocean

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From:
alynwa
Date:
03/14/2013
This is fantastic! The way you write thier love one can almost feel it physically. Thank you so much for sharing.

From:
sharvonny
Date:
01/18/2013
It is really, really disgusting!! how well you write these MFU fictions. Thank you very, very much

Shar

From:
Sue
Date:
01/09/2013
Oh, so beautiful! I cried all the way through the story and rejoiced when the monsters were banished for good.

From:
yelizaveta
Date:
01/08/2013
Very nice. You're stories don't come too often and they are always a treat.

From:
Gevr
Date:
01/04/2013
this is very beautiful and very touching. I like the way you describe Napoleon´s turmoil, all the way keeping in touch with Illy´s inner turmoil. They progress , each in its own way, to the culminating point of the story. Illya´s inner monologue keeps pace with Napoleon´s problems and tribulations, until at the end everything blends together. I like this story very very much ... But then again, I like all your stories very, very much :)

Gerda

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