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From:
Arcadii
Date:
05/31/2014
This was just too sad and broke my heart!

From:
Gerda
Date:
10/20/2013
Thank you so much for posting this ! I read The Epilogue and it made me purchase the series of a Trackless Domain, but I must say that I like this ending much better than the other ending of the zines. I found it a bit disturbing that Jess, who is quite possessed with Illya , leaves the playing field so smoothly, without a fight. This Epilogue an Dark Passage seem much more in character for him. Please keep writing your wonderful stories, each time I discover one it makes my day :-)

From:
Gerda
Date:
10/20/2013
Im so glad you are posting this here. I read The Epilogue and it made me buy the other stories of the Trackless Domain series. I like the Epilogue an Dark passage better than the end of the story that is on sale. I found it a bit disturbing that Jess left the field so easily in those. Its quite obvious he is in love and to give up on a loved one is never easy, not for the one who loves and not for the one who is loved either. Please keep writing your wonderful stories, I love them all :-)

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