Thoroughly enjoyed your story. I admired the way you expressed the way Illya felt after the Uncle medics has finished with him. Too often he is portrayed as almost super-human. I would not have helped Mother Fear either. Well done.
From: alynwa Date: 06/26/2014
I love your stories and this one is no exception. Well done!
From: Pippa Date: 06/26/2014
I check c&gm monthly on the off chance of a new story. To find one by my favorite writer...what at treat.
I loved it. The line about allowing napoleon's presence to move him out of he building was very good. How tired illya felt was perfect and would certainly have been the case.
Your Napoleon was very sweet, knowing just what Illya mpneeded and not asking any conversation in return. Nice done.