I love the way you portray Napoleon, spending most his time groping Illya then-just like THAT. "I'm done with this place," and blasting the shit out of a wall.
"Well what do you know, an outside wall."
This is one of my favorite MFU fanfics.
From: ellen Date: 11/06/2005
Who needs a mirror-How's my hair- this is just too funny.
From: Lonelamb Date: 05/16/2005
An absolutely delightful story!
The description of their situation is spot-on and so in accordance with the darkness theme :)
The banter is delightful, and the resolution is so typical of the pair - a story with a twist!