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Comments on Paso Doble

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From:
Shayheyred
Date:
08/28/2005
Lovely story, which perfectly captures the dynamic between them. And your last line zinged right through me.

From:
Y
Date:
08/26/2005
Very nice writing in such few words. I like how you show their synchronicity together, which shows their connection, then have such a moment that a look is like a kiss. I want more!

[Also, do not feel you have to respond to my feedback--I would just love to see more writing!]

From:
Sue
Date:
08/26/2005
Oh Bravo! BRAVO! Mucho applauso! MORE!!!

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