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Comments on Breaking Up

Number of comments: 8

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From:
Deb
Date:
11/13/2013
Oh my! Your writing is consistently wonderful.....

I am so sorry you appear to have stopped.

Your handling of these characters is wonderfully complex and satisfying.

From:
Pippa
Date:
02/01/2013
Hard to praise this story any more highly than the others have so just accept my "Wow!" This was tremendous. The angst was measured and so well delivered. The ending was perfect. Wow. Great story.

From: Sabine Griffin
Date:
01/17/2009
This is fantastic. It's horrifying and painful and utterly perfect. Your handling of a situation that could have so easily slid into the often awful realms of flangst was brilliant. It was dark, and rich, and sour, and real.

Thank you for writing this.

From: Neon
Date:
11/10/2008
This is one of the most well-written MFU stories I have read. True to character, touching, beautifully done. The ending gave me chills. Thanks!

From: Periwinkle
Date:
08/06/2008
I have to agree with the people above - very haunting. You've done a nice job of interweaving Illya's flashbacks with the stories, and your description of Napoleon's confusion is very powerful.

From: ellen
Date:
11/22/2006
a very powerful story, this one will haunt me for awhile.

From: Shayheyred
Date:
06/27/2006
Utterly, breathtakingly fabulous.

From: Viviana
Date:
06/25/2006
Strongly written and involving with poignant flashbacks. But ... what the hell is Napoleon thinking??? Please make him see the light in a sequel? *g*

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