Very good storytelling. Complex storylines, hot sex, complicated Napoleon and Illya; I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing!
From: Neon Date: 10/05/2008
Loved this as much as "Good Cop". You weave such wonderful complexity into their relationship, and the sex scenes are believable and tastefully done.
From: Nataliya Date: 02/06/2006
Hey, where did this story come from? Was it in a zine? I'm missing a lot. Thanks, C&GM, for showcasing these stories for all to see.
This story uses several episodes as a background, but they don't interfere with the relationship in the foreground. NS and IK are typical men, cryptic instead of forthcoming. They try to decipher each other without plain talk. Napoleon wonders what Illya is thinking, Illya remains his unreadable self. Sex does their talking for them. It's casual, but very hot.
With wry and clever dialogue throughout, the story flies by. We need a counterpart to "a page-turner" on the web. This story is "a page-scroller."