Enjoyed Return to Innocence but a bit lost about the prequels! Found Save me but lot of refences to Arabia events. What story was this????
From: Romanse Date: 09/11/2007
Oh my! I LOVE this continuing saga! LOL - it hurts so good if ya know what I mean! It was sweet torment watching the de-evolution of Napoleon's and Illya's relationship. You did a fantastic job of not only showing them suffering under their mutual misunderstanding due to failure to communicate, really showing the reader how they got there.
I enjoyed reading this very much. There is one thing that you REALLY should do in regards to format that would make for an even better reading experience: Please put some sort of indicators anytime you have a change of scene. Some writers use something like: ****** or even a straight line will do.
From: Vickie Date: 08/02/2007
Please, please, get your muse(s) out and get writing! You can't leave our favorite guys like this! (To say nothing of your readers!)
From: Yvonne Date: 03/19/2007
Please tell me that this story is not over. You're writing more(?) a sequel(?) something (!!!)to finish this story. NS and IK have got to end up together!!!!!!!!
From: nicola chan Date: 03/18/2007
I loved this story but I am begging you here. You can not leave it like this. Please they need to be together. Emotionaly,physicaly, Napoleon and Illya have to be together to survive. So I am down on bended knees here please, please write a sequel and bring the world to rights. Thank you.
From: Angela Neuhaus Date: 03/05/2007
AAAAAAAGGHHH! I was perfectly happy reading 'Ferryman' over and over, and then you guys had to go and write 'Save Me'. You two are awesome - after about the second sentence of your stories I forget that I'm reading and feel instead that I am actually present and watching, hearing, and feeling everything that is going on. But now you leave poor NS and IK pining for each other! Please tell me there is another sequel coming s-o-o-n (as in tomorrow). Seriously, please keep writing - a lot!
From: Nezad Date: 03/04/2007
I look forward to more of the story, if only to tell each other where they're at. I don't see the physical relationship continuing -- and at thsi point, hope it doesn't, just b/c they're on different levels on where they're willing to go. Hopefully they can be more at ease with each other, at least. If not, though, this fic seems like a great way to segue into the parting of the ways they ultimately had in the 15YLA.