Wonderful storytelling! Hit just the right notes without being over the top.
From: spikesgirl58 Date: 08/28/2009
I read this story a long time ago and had forgotten just how great it was. You struck the perfect balance and you taught clarice a number of valuable lessons without being preachy about it - you taught her to think for herself,to believe in her own choices, realize that ti's important to reach out to those around you, even when they might not seem 'your type' - she did a lot of growing up in a very short period of time.
Thanks for a great read...
From: Lynn Date: 11/27/2006
I would say that Clarice did grow up some. She was unbelievably naive at first.
From: Francis Kerst Date: 07/03/2006
Quite remarkable; I like to read a story where everything is significant without being heavy or preaching. The characters' voices are perfectly right and the girl's reactions and behaviour too. Well done!
From: Liz Martin Date: 05/31/2006
Love this story. Clarice is the kind of OC who I like because she doesn't take over the story - and she's nice. I really enjoyed seeing the guys through her eyes. And it had Illya H/C so it was pretty well perfect. Well written and lots of fun. THank you.
From: Sue Date: 05/25/2006
AWWW! that was so nice. Thank you. Such a positive message and the voice of Clarice was just right.