Excellent. And the ending is perfect. England is just right.
From: alynwa Date: 03/24/2011
I enjoyed this very much. Thanks for sharing.
From: Kiwi Bird Date: 09/14/2010
The overall plot line was quite good, and many aspects of the execution were good, too, but the continual reminders that Illya and Napoleon were a couple seemed kind of forced. These things should seem natural, organic. You have a knack for plot, and your dialogue isn't bad. :) Practice makes perfect, ne? Thanks for writing and sharing.
