This is exquisite. This is a condensed little diamond in the rough, just waiting for someone to find it. You really have something here.
From: ellen Date: 08/15/2006
From: Periwinkle Date: 07/31/2006
This is so well done on several levels. First I like the description of Solo's actions and his thoughts. The language is very poetic and seductive. Then to have it turn into Illya talking about what he wants and what his needs are, frankly and openly, adds a whole new dimension to it.