This was a lot of fun to read! Great dialog, and I esp. loved "Of course Napoleon had to spread himself out, like a gas expanding to fill the available volume. It was amazing a bed of any size could hold him." What a good observation!
From: spikesgirl58 Date: 10/31/2009
What a fun frolic. I enjoyed the banter, so true to character for them - Napoleon's more *um* solicitious nature and Illya's lack a patience in some matters.
I'm left with wonering just how long it did take for Napoleon to get out of that tie.
it took me ahwile to get here, but what a treat!
From: Elijahwildchild Date: 05/12/2009
Slippery with soap, indeed. *snorts*
I LOVE this. Language, imagery, humour. Thank you.
I really hope you're working up to a long piece. Your shorter work is fabulous but I sense a longer story waiting in the wings. Please? (No pressure. *g*)
From: Periwinkle Date: 04/24/2009
I really like this, especially with Illya getting the drop on Solo at the end.
Your language has a lot of nice description and evokes the shifting moods very well.