Loved this fic! I have to agree with another reviewer, who said it felt like a regular Muncle episode with the slash added in. Napoleon and Illya both seemed very in-character to me, with the development of their physical affection feeling very genuine and natural. My favourite scene was when they first kissed as prisoners in the darkened room: such a beautiful, intimate moment amid the chaos. I also loved the fashion: I'm practically drooling thinking of how amazing Napoleon and Illya would look in tight pants and parkas, astride a pair of Vespas. Thanks for writing and sharing! I'd definitely love to read that sequel someday, if you ever find the time :)
From: Neon Date: 10/04/2008
"knights in wet cotton".....(snort) How funny! This was great through and through. It read like a MFU script but with the slash written in. Great dialogue and great love scenes.
From: Kay Date: 01/11/2008
Marvelous! I love the quotes and the authentic retro feel. The tone was right too. It felt like an episode. And the humor between Napoleon and Illya was right on target. Can't wait to read more MFU from you.