Wow! Well done. This is the first story I have read that had Illya on top. Usually, it just doesn't feel right. (No pun intended) But, I liked how you kept Napoleon "in charge" (clears throat) without making Illya weak. I realize now that's how I prefer our boys.....(daydreaming)....Illya quivering and helplessly giving in to his desire and Napoleon knowing all along that Illya wanted him....oops, sorry about that.
Isn't fantasy grand?
From: erin Date: 09/14/2008
This was so sweet. I loved it. Thanks.
From: elijahwildchild Date: 07/06/2008
Just rediscovering this with real joy. Athough alternate universe, it's plausible, avoids the dreaded pitfall of the saccharine and has some deliciously hot sex. It always seems to me to be exactly the way their lives should have played out after the series ended. Lovely. Hope you don't mind but I've recced it over at Crack Van.
From: Deb Date: 01/10/2008
Very powerful, very thought provoking and very, very satisfying. I'll hold this one in my heart to replay over and over.
From: Periwinkle Date: 12/13/2007
I just reread this. I like the imagery of the arms signifying trust and how you return to it through-out the story
From: Nezad Date: 11/24/2007
Wow, I can honestly say this was something I'd *never* thought Polya would do. You had me on pins and needles throughout the story! I still quite don't believe it!