This was amazing. A long, agonizing build up, a wild action adventure, spot on characterization and finally hot, sweet, savage, romantic love-making and commitment. Wow. Your dialog sounds just like them - inner dialog included. It was like everything I ever wished they would do in an episode and much more. Thank you so much for sharing your incredible gift with the rest of us. Thank you.
From: alynwa Date: 12/26/2010
How appropriate that I found this story to read at this time of year! I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing!