So much ache in that last line, every time I read it. Lovely.
From: Sue Date: 04/17/2010
It wasn't until I read the last comment that I realized you didn't use names, and my mind had automatically placed two in position.
A very clever little piece. Very enjoyable. Thank you!
From: Httjs Date: 03/07/2010
It is very vague... but yet very meaningful. It's like although a lot of the story is missing you can fill in all the details with your imagination. Such as the woman narrorating and the man that she is with. What the circumstances are. Wow. You are truly a talented author.