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From:
periwinkle
Date:
04/02/2011
I won't bore you by telling you yet again how much I love this series, but I did want to say that this little bit of dialogue is wonderful:

He closed his eyes content to just be for the moment.

"Are we losing you?"

"Mmm, no, I'm awake," Illya said, not moving. "I'm listening."

From:
arcadii
Date:
09/15/2009
I love this series . . . the way you've written the relationship between Napoleon and Illya is very romantic without being sappy. I wish that there was a way to diffentiate the order of the stories in the series; I felt a little confused at times. That was my only complaint. Other than that the story idea was great (I think a chef would've been more plausible for Illya than a dress designer - it's like the writers were making a weak attempt at slash, but weren't that good) and your original characters were wonderful. I want to go into a restaurant and find a Rocky serenading his Matt, the staff and everyone else with ABBA.

Sorry this has turned into War and Peace. All I really wanted to say was how much I enjoyed this series and hope that there will be more! Maybe Jackson can become a haven for retired agents and the newest citizens could be April and Mark. I'm sure they could attract enough trouble to keep the senior agents busy.

From:
Robin Grande
Date:
09/06/2009
I enjoyed your entire series with Illya as an accomplished chef, and Napoleon joining him in domestic bliss. Nice to see such a happy ending for the fellows. I liked that they could be open and loving, but still retained their masculinity. They seemed true to the characters of the series, if a little wiser due to age and experience. Very Nice.

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