Beautifully written and a change from your usual, which is nice. But I'm afraid it's too intense and brutal for me. I know you had a warning, but I thought it was going to be the usual stuff with his uncle. I wasn't prepared for torture.
From: Loosha Date: 10/09/2010
Brutal yet beautiful.
From: pinbot Date: 01/21/2010
Another wonderful, emotional one from you! I just love the tenderness between them as you write it.
From: Lillian Date: 01/18/2010
You provided the reader with some powerful imagery of both the emotional and physical genres. You set up a scenario that led to a logical conclusion - taking the friendship to the next level. You did not sensationalize it...you did not focus on the intimacy as the center of your plot...it was just a incredible segue to that which was bound to happen.