Brilliant. I was absorbed in your story from the first moment.
THRUSH's ingenuity in creating such a complex plot was refreshing to see—they are so often portrayed as dull-witted goons. And Illya and Napoleon's cleverness in leaving memory bread crumbs behind was a great twist.
I love it when a story maximizes the intelligence of both the protagonist and antagonist, as yours did. Thanks so much for sharing your story with us readers. And now, on to the sequel.
From: Loosha Date: 12/04/2010
Excellent story! Extremely entertaining in so many ways. I was totally drawn in, a part of the story. The boys were perfect, you have captured their essence.
From: Glenna Date: 09/16/2010
So well done. This is a very fine story with the perfect blend of emotions and action. I'm heading off to read the sequel on LJ. Kudos.
From: Francine Date: 09/16/2010
Oh! No..no..no! You can't be leaving us like this? There is a sequel, right? Please? Absolutely great writing, I enjoyed this very much. Ready to enjoy more though! Cheers.....Francine
From: paulaH Date: 09/14/2010
I'm with Molly. I'm ready for the sequel.
From: Molly Cate Date: 09/14/2010
Just read Mesphisto (I know, my spelling is awful) again. And, I hate to be a nag, but, please, could you write a follow-up to this? It's lovely and very sad... so, could you put the boys back on track? Please (whine, whine, whine)... Thank you! Molly Cate