I agree with all the previous comments. I thought the conversation between the boys was "lovely" I know that is not a very good description, but it made me feel all warm inside. Thank you.
From: Kay Date: 04/20/2012
Your work is understated and on-target with these characters. I really appreciate reading something so intelligent and mature. Keep writing.
From: Sue Date: 04/10/2012
Wonderful epilogue. Thanks so much.
From: alynwa Date: 04/10/2012
Very interesting epilogue for the 15 years later fiasco. I much prefer this ending. Thanks for sharing.
From: lgvu Date: 03/29/2012
Wonderful; you have their voices down perfectly, and their ages as well. Reading this makes me think more fondly of the Return movie.
From: JB Date: 03/28/2012
So lovely this. Wonderful blending of times. Hopeful for the future. Thanks so much.