this is really, really beautiful ! I like the way you ´say´ so much while really saying very little explicitly. The end keeps me coming back :-) Very well done !
From: Francesca Date: 05/07/2012
Impressive! Probably my favorite of yours so far. Thank you.
From: Elijahwildchild Date: 05/06/2012
Hands! My favourite things - especially Illya's ;o) *pants a bit*
I loved the battles for custody of the capsule, "Hay gives me lumps" and "You get exploded much?" to name but a few. Your use of language does it for me every time. Hugely satisfying throughout.
This "He had taken off his shirt and his t-shirt rode the muscles of his arms and chest..." made me dribble a bit, and the climax of the "handling" scene had me reaching for the fan!
Your endings always leave me stunned and this last paragraph was brilliant, as ever. Thank you so much for sharing this treat :o)
From: ChannelD Date: 05/05/2012
LOVED THIS all the way through it. Exciting story, wonderful chemistry, both of their voices spot on - just a beautiful timeless interlude for me, and I thank you for it.
